tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post1778643639586098147..comments2023-10-10T14:01:09.358+00:00Comments on The Case of the Missing Family: Chapter 144Bill Blunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15395505727397010185noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-39345468136980620812007-09-18T13:51:00.000+00:002007-09-18T13:51:00.000+00:00What a wicked web you weave, sir!What a wicked web you weave, sir!Fantonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06957634246020154160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-87570962204610481212007-09-18T07:23:00.000+00:002007-09-18T07:23:00.000+00:00Thanks for joining the readership, simon - and for...Thanks for joining the readership, simon - and for your thoughtful comments.<BR/><BR/>Yes, the first four chapters or so are certainly the ones I would like to re-write most. As the whole Harry story started out as something of a spoof, the language is far too derivitive and will benefit from a thorough overhaul.<BR/><BR/>But first, I guess I've got to drive this all to a satisfactory conclusionBill Blunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15395505727397010185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-3214892962838770982007-09-17T22:08:00.000+00:002007-09-17T22:08:00.000+00:00The pace is hotting up!I'm sure you've had a good ...The pace is hotting up!<BR/><BR/>I'm sure you've had a good giggle working through the scenarios, but no doubt a bit of a headache deciding on the right combination. <BR/><BR/>Very much looking forward to Lillian's Poirot moment, but dreading the end because it will be the end.Enumeratorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16426662245504593999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-91325813871530107352007-09-17T20:15:00.000+00:002007-09-17T20:15:00.000+00:00I had a day off toad today, and spent all day (mor...I had a day off toad today, and spent all day (more or less) reading the entire McFry saga to date in one hit (comments and all).<BR/>Absolutely enthralling.<BR/>I much prefer the style in the later chapters to the earlier, pastiche, which was well enough observed, but I always find those ‘clever’ similes a barrier to the flow, rather than the wealth of superb imagery that you are able to conjureAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-73903537418227911942007-09-17T15:33:00.000+00:002007-09-17T15:33:00.000+00:00Oops!Harry told Lillian he wasn't Danny's Dad in C...Oops!<BR/>Harry told Lillian he wasn't Danny's Dad in Chapter 63.<BR/>I'm reading the whole story again from the beginning.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-71317726003509490692007-09-17T12:18:00.000+00:002007-09-17T12:18:00.000+00:00Thanks, too, Monica!Thanks, too, Monica!Bill Blunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15395505727397010185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-90097634932547616122007-09-17T08:41:00.000+00:002007-09-17T08:41:00.000+00:00Thank you, 70steen and stumped!Never mind Harry - ...Thank you, 70steen and stumped!<BR/><BR/>Never mind Harry - I think I'm going to have my work cut out remembering who is Ana, Elliot, Laurel and Bill in this one!<BR/><BR/>Kind Regards<BR/><BR/>THJnrBill Blunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15395505727397010185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-67967975549430484092007-09-17T08:36:00.000+00:002007-09-17T08:36:00.000+00:00Romping to a brilliant finish! The writing's just...Romping to a brilliant finish! The writing's just getting better and better. I'm enjoying this so much - can't wait for the next chapter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17005839886985666272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-25302711711181709532007-09-16T19:52:00.000+00:002007-09-16T19:52:00.000+00:00I hope that everyone is going to remember who they...I hope that everyone is going to remember who they are supposed to be. Is Harry still Danny's father? How is Bill going to explain his new name to Harry? <BR/>This is excellent reading, THAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124050587534021646.post-12579046777693109372007-09-16T18:43:00.000+00:002007-09-16T18:43:00.000+00:00There'll be standing room only soon ..... can't wa...There'll be standing room only soon ..... can't wait to see this web of intrigue and deception unravel :-)70steenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04855009735939666409noreply@blogger.com